My Netbook Reflection 2013

The Bush Narrative

Speech Presentation

My speech, is telling you to live, through pain in your life, and when I am analysing my song choice I mention peace and happiness and how this song can change the world

Low Tide

Low Tide - School Journal October, 2013 - Level 3

1. Summarise the poem you have read in your own words.

• The poem I read with my reading group this week is about....
• The beach and how the tide went out

2. Identify at least 2 different language features in the poem and give examples. You can identify more than 2 language features.

• One of the language features in this poem are: Crackling Here is an example of this language feature…: the crackling noises when your walking on empty pipi shells,or seashells.
• Another language feature in this poem is: Wading .Here is an example of this language feature…: how people are walking through water, or other liquids

3. Evaluate (which means reflect and give your opinion) the author’s purpose for writing this poem - in your answers include the words: inform, entertain, persuade.

• By analysing the poem I have read this week I think the author wrote this poem because so we understand what’s its in ocean, and what happens to the ocean and what it does, and what’s in the ocean
• The author was informing me about… how the ocean tide was going out, and how all the sand, and how seashells come up when the tide comes in and goes out
• The author was entertaining me by...  all of the emotional words in the text and all the descriptive words he used for that one topic (emotions/language features)
• The author was persuading me to think/believe/reflect… to believe that this is real, and that low tides are fascinating to look at when you're at the beach, and what lies left from the ocean when the tide goes out.

4. Add a picture on your Doc related to your poem.

AFTER

BEFORE

Friendship Poem

FRIENDSHIP

When you need a shoulder to cry on,

I’ll be that shoulder.

When you need a pillow to lie on,

I’ll be that pillow.

When you need a diary to talk to,

I’ll be that diary.

When you need someone to hug you,

I’ll be that someone.

When you need a soothing song,

I’ll sing it for you.

No matter how dumb my voice sounds.

No matter how far away we are, we will always be together

But, when you need a friend,

I’ll be that friend.

By Kyra T

Finders Keepers.

Sometimes you lose stuff and gain stuff but at the end of the day its is important to take care of your belongings or else it will be the finders keepers game.

 

Our School Movie Trailer - Manaiakalani Film Festival

Click play to view the trailer of the movies our school have made for the Manaiakalani Film Festival this year. 

 
Manaiakalani Film Festival Trailer - Tamaki Primary School Movies from Tamaki Primary on Vimeo.